Lovely…
Brown eyes
Smiling gently
Fixed upon me, unmoved
Precious gaze from across the room
Longing.
Saw him
Affinity, my heart connected
Long to be loved forever
Beloved instant
Perhaps…
Author notes
Mirror cinquian 2,4,6,8,2,8,6,4,2
In a list
A contest entry
- short forms (30 words?) by ValleyOfEchoes.
500 points, ended August 8, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I enjoyed this a lot. I am so afraid of form poetry for fear that I will suck at it. You pulled it off very well. The imagery and flow were great and the emotion nicely conveyed. Great poem!
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What a lovely Mirror Cinquian..I can feel love here..
All the best dear!
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very pretty MC,, i loved the imagery brought to read beautifully, thank you for this entry, good luck
Linda
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