It was always missing in my life
A gap that was in my growing heart
But my parents were amazing
Could never ask for more loving people
My sister, well that is story is for another day
A brother was absent though
Our family line corrupted
I never believed I would find him
The brother I never had
At a graduation party for another friend
Only that one time dud we neet
From then on we talked all the time
he was there for me and I for him
Some days we would have our differences
But I love him, like a brother
He has been there, right in front of me
That brother who is my friend
Author notes
Just something I wrote about a good friend of mine. It is my first expierence with a great friend that I love a like a brother, and I have to say it is one of my favorites.
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You show really well how the people that come in to our life can sometimes feel like they have always suppose to be there, and they can feel more like family. This gave a lovely message, Great work x
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AAAh
What a great write...I loved, "that brother who is my friend". Family is hard to live without...glad you found yours. Nicely written with great heart felt setiment.
Good job.
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Thank you Kate! you just rock. I want you to know that. I just dont know how to thank you for this. That really does mean a lot to me.
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This is really good and I think you did a great job. From what I have read the two of you get along very well. Your parents are amazing people and so is your sister even if she may not always act like it. Great job!
Some days we would have our differences
But I love him, like a brother
He has been there, right in front of me
That brother who is my friend.
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