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Poisonous Protection.

The sky dark, unclear and shadowed by the doubt of our refuge.
The Castle, more like a watchtower, stands across the sinful sorrowed shores.
The very instance to protect a priestess from the rest of the world.

A darkened book, much more cynical, than the ideal of a devil itself.
It’s pages carved of flesh, smoother than any papyrus or oak.
It’s words written in blood of the hostile sinful soldiers, their souls entrapped.
For every word is another scattered fragment of an enemy long past deceased.

The messenger is a woman craving nothing more but love itself.
Her mind constricted by the thought of another, a man, a lover, a friend.
She’s trapped within the woods living on nothing, but the dream of one.
Love has warped her mind, craved her into obsession, and molded her into perfection.

This lonely writ scribes to herself on fleshy pages, her only small fraction of a friend.
The ink, her only form of human contact is infused with friends, her hell bound soldiers.
Her mind wanders like a cloud shadowing every thought with angry tempests.
All of her prayer, which remains suppressed within her mind, has never been heard.
This isolation is more like poison than protection.

Everyday her mind revolves around the same schedule at this time,
She remains on the shores with her sorrow emanating like an aura.
The rocks uneven beneath her solitary article of clothing, a dress of darker hue.

She watches the castle with her black eyes darker than any raven.
Her mind rushes faster than horseback praying her imagination would come true.
Her hate, her despise floods through her body through the canal of veins.
Fury, worse than the devil itself, flows unevenly through her silhouetted frame.
Her face contorts her blood surges, her mind races, she’s fallen victim to sin.

Her sorrowed mind drowned by anger lies suppressed like every thought.
Revenge reins supreme as she crawls into the shores to make an attempt.
A lonely sorrowed god waves her hand in her favour.

Author notes

I'm quite afraid to add my reentry, but I somehow got deleted from your contest,
so I had to delete and repost.
I have the same credits, the same picture,
I hope you understand, madam.

Picture Title-dojzhara om svej'
Artist- =night-fate
Url: http://night-fate.deviantart.com/art/dojzhara-om-svej-92716231

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  • I don't know how you got deleted, I really don't. Oh well and tis not a problem =D An interesting read. The take on the prompt was quiet literal, something I've found in a few poems in this contest. Thank you for entering and good luck =D Sorry about the mix up
  • WOW

    This is an amazing piece that really captures alot of raw emotion. It's long and yet ever so worth the read. The imagery is to die for and i certainly envy your way with words. The story was absolutley amazing. Great write indeed.

    =] Keep on writing.

    <3