hey sorry if this is not good
i am very new to this
this is actually my first contest
sorry to hear about these incidents
i can only hope he recovers
sounds like an amazing man
well here it goes;
i try to freeze time and go back
but you keep on passing by
a minute feels like a year
i keep losing track of time
these tears form weeks on end
but you keep dashing through my mind
i just want to say i love you
behind these crashing eyes
im really sorry but thats all i can think of
its not much but it may speak to you
take care
hope the best
-Brandon
A contest entry
- I dont know what to say anymore... by Bloody Wonder.
450 points, ended August 19, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i actually really like this... its short but pretty much exactly what i wanted to say i to him... it wouldve been nice if youd meantioned his friends and family but i really do love this
thanks for entering
madi
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