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Broken Down

For every boy I've ever liked
Heartbreak always seemed to follow
And for each and every boy I meet
The rejection's harder to swallow

Moving away, no good-bye said
Then they say young love never lasts
Even when you want it to stay
A gloomy shadow upon it casts

A kiss hidden from everyone
Like the kiss had never been done
The lies that lead the truth astray
Doing nothing but wishing it away

Then finding the guy of my dreams
Being shot down after he knew
Seeing him each day and each week
Wishing I never spoke the truth

Another man to enter in
Another hopeless tradgedy
Another day to wish for fate
To cloister my heart, shatter-free

These four men came, and four men left
Each leaving chaos in their wake
A shattered heart to mend and break
For each new year, each breath I take

I met a boy today, so what?
He'll soon leave me to cry my tears
But I'm going to take a chance
So heart, yes, I confirm your fears

I hope that you do not shatter
I pray, heart, that you will not break
It will be better than before
Know this, I pray for both our sakes


Author notes

I chose to do prompt #1. This poem covers only 4 guys and you can tell which verses are for each guy. I hop you like the poem. . .

http://iza87.deviantart.com/art/Dear-Heart-59157645

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  • Nicely done~
    I loved the story behind this and i could relate so well!
    Beautiful form also
    keep penning these writes i see great talent!

    Thanks for entering
    Hugs
    ~Lisa~