My nails lengthen
as I stalk my innocent victim
Mbody is ravenous
My skin pale
They said I was insane
They put me in an asylum
To them I am...
bipolar crazed and violent criminal
I keep a token of my victim's charred remains
In the end
after my judgment
people are riveted
taking my tale as simple fiction
Author notes
used: fiction, riveted, judgment, charred, nails, stalk, innocent, ravenous, insane, pale, asylume, therapy, bi polar, violent, criminal, token...hope you injoy
A contest entry
- FIVE YEAR AP ANNIVERSARY BASH!!!! by Auburn Sunrise.
5000 points, ended August 15, 48 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Strange choice of backgrounds.
Also interesting words. I don't think "charred" was on the list - "marred" was, but that doesn't really matter I suppose.
"bipolar" should be one word, like I have written here.
"insane" should also be one word
"aylum" should be "asylum"
Good job!!!
Thanks for entering and good luck.
Oh, and you may want to capitalize your "i"s.
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