finger twisted
around a
necklace
made out of
coke soda
tabs.
paint covered
your nails as
i watched you
create the
girl on the wall.
that was never me.
Author notes
this is for all the times i never saw you draw.
love.
i'm sorry if this isn't good.
it's 5 AM and i've been up for 37 hours.
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A contest entry
- artist by zillion.
450 points, ended August 7, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
you always liked kneaded erasers
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For Those Times...
I suppose we all can relate to the scenic imagery. Very bittersweet in short lines, but it tells alot. I can see this scene playing out and I enjoyed it.
Congradulations on the bronze.
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This is good.
Its so simple, yet so heartfelt.
Keep writing, you have a great talent. =] -
Excellent - clear and powerful imagery.
Keep sharing your gift.
HENSLEY
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thank you!
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aw...I never thought I'd say this but...this is cute. And this is coming from someone who is totally unromantic. Still, it's got that emotional pull you can't ignore.
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thank you!
i was actually about to delete this from your contest, but now that i know that you like it, i'll keep it.
C:
thank you so much!
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