The heavens open with their caressing tears,
The rain whispers through the trees.
To some the world outside is to be feared,
And yet to her it is a place of sweetest dreams.
She is the spirit of heaven and earth,
The untainted wild lands are her home.
She is the embodiment of nature’s rebirth,
And it’s children follow wherever she may roam.
She rides free upon unfettered winds,
And commands the fury of the world itself.
Her realm is one of peaceful things,
Threaten it and she shall bring you hell.
Her visage is illuminated beneath the stars,
See her venerated by the wolves.
A soul that dark humanity will never mar,
Hear her name howled with nightfall.
Author notes
One for Nightfall/Lise's birthday on the 30th tomorrow. She's my soul sister from EQ2 and is obsessed with wolves nature and the like. ;P Unfortunately she's not on this site because she thinks her english wouldn't be good enough since it's not her native language, even though sometimes to me she's the only one making any sense.
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I havent read many poems about animals, let alone a creature is intresting as a wolf, and if i read another animal poem i shall compare it to this. It is brillainty worded, put togher and presented
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This is beautiful, Jon. It made me smile just reading it. Your flow is perfect too.
And, well, about her english...you should tell her that there are a bunch of teenagers on this site who make even less sense than anyone who doesn't speak english well due to nativity. She'd fit in fine. Lmao.
Seriously though, that really shouldn't stop her if she's interested.
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Bah, just realised if i'd done 2 more lines it might have been passable as an english sonnet.
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Lmao. Could always add a couple.
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I know, but she's been paranoid about her english for years.
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I am here =) ty you so much it means alot for me =)
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