Two hearts submitted to love
Surrendered to the source of life
Looking to hope which comes from above
With wounded hearts pierced by a knife
Two longing to become as one soul
Waiting, trusting, hoping for the best
Placing on the alter not half but the whole
Stand before the other without shame, undressed
Hand in hand and heart inside heart
Two friends joined together for life
Bound and committed never to depart
Beginning together as man and wife
A contest entry
- Marry Me? by luna-midnight.
1000 points, ended August 18, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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excellent~
This is beautiful...
I have been married to my hubby for 25 yrs
Hard to believe sometimes...this one is for a lifetime
Best of luck in the contest
It's a winner in my book
Hugs
Susan~~~
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that was good, well done! Unfortunately these days it doesnt seem to matter that they made an oath on the alter :-(, so its good to see that someone still lives by it :-).
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awww this is beautiful, a lovely thought of marriage, good luck and take care
thanks for entering
Stephanie ♥
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