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im giving this my all!

when i talk to you,
my heart starts to melt,

sometimes i wonder,
is this really meant to be,

Are you going to fucking leave me,
you left that one girl for me,

so that gets me thinking what will i do,
if you leave me then ill burry my heart deeper then before,

the pain of old wounds opening up,
i dont think i can bare it anymore,

i am giving you my all,
so im tell you now dont let me fucking fall,

lets just say i can make your life a living hell!

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  • good!

    abused the cussing a bit... but very good! Thanks for the entry!

    The Famous Reese Baliey