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From Whence I Stand...

From whence I stand;
I see the depths and swells of a sea angered,
The depression I sank into deepens for reasons unknown,
I watch and cry tears for the distance between us,
Longing for the warmth of your touch and the comfort of knowing;
That you'll be home at the end of the day for a cuddle,
I know it shan't be long before we are together again,
Yet still these tears fall and I sigh a lonesome sigh;
Wishing that I were there with you once more,
I've never felt this before, if things were to stop...

Our song, the one I claimed for us, buzzes in my headphones,
Singing along as my tears mingle with the rain that's begun to fall,
Your loneliness is all too apparent, I rang you last night to hear;
"I'm at C103, I got bored" over the top of the thud of the bass,
I swear to you I'll be there soon, it's my promise to you,
I shan't be away for long, I will return home.

I love you.

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I love you baby... I miss you so much.

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  • Rhythm Child silver member
    October 29
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    simply beautiful

  • Wow your poetry always out stands me this is amazing honey, i can relate to it so so much, its got such a sweet longing feel to it and i adore this poem, i really do, all my love, im here for you
    kitty xxx
  • wow!!! that was really good!!! i really liked how you wrote it and the choice of words u chose. good job!!! i loved it!!!
  • mikeyskona
    August 3

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    Awwww

    heh :$ I love you too baby... I'll try to be around a little more.. Sometimes i forget you get bored too. xxxxxx

  • This is beautiful as you are, sweetheart...and I wish there was something I could do to stop the tears...but just know that I am thinking of you, and I know you can make it until you see him again.

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