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Poetry Garden

The sun shines down so sweetly on the garden that we grew
     Where the branches bob and bustle on the breeze
Each bloom can tell a story of the nurturing it knew
     And the beauty sets each dreamer at their ease
The roses in a riot run in rivulets of red
     Azaleas abound at every turn
A million perfect petals seem to float across each bed
     There's so much more each gardener must learn
The pretty pinks must earn their place while strident poppies shout
     The overall effect can make you weep
With rows and lines of artistry, few weeds need grubbing out
     A stonewall where a clematis can creep
The formal beds I cultivate the meadow where you play
    The paths between where we can often meet
The garden of our poetry is where I'd spend each day
    A garden that will never be complete

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  • Slick
    August 20

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    this is good!!! have a great day, Jeff. -slick99

  • Dalaney gold member
    August 4
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    i love it. Lane


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    August 4
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    You're never happier than when you're in a garden.

  • Wonderfull done.

    Best wishes to you in the contest

    Love

    Passions


  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 3
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    and good luck

    in the contest

  • Thomas Scott gold member
    August 3
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    Boffo!

    You can inhale the thing.
    Good stuff.


  • Amera gold member
    August 3

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    This is beautiful and the meter flows like a smooth stream. Your imagery is lovely as you have brought life to each flower and made the garden a haven for peace. I'm entered in this contest; I guess I better pull out now and save face.

    Love,
    Amera♥

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