You bite, suck hard, and taste;
Not a drop do you waste.
She blinks back painful tears.
She’ll be your feast for years.
Skin disturbed by your bite;
Drink deeply. Bleed her white.
Author notes
Word Bank Prompt Option 2: bite, waste, blink, disturbed, white
In a list
A contest entry
- The Wordbank Compels You. . . . by iamlost.
600 points, ended August 6, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow, chilling! Just what I'd hoped for from this option! I love that last line, just completely ruthless. Wonderfully written, best of luck in the contest!
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I am glad you enjoyed the poem. I enjoyed the contest, but dark vampire poems are not my forte. Your comments and applause are appreciated.
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Lol had "bite" my friend ( haha sorry )It was sooo wide open! I couldnt help myself
Great write
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Haha. I am glad you liked it. I dont expect to write more vampire poems. This is likely to be the one and only.
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Danged skeeters
Wonderful. I think there might be a shot you can get for those things
LOL
This is wonderful, but honestly, I wasn't ascared..not a bit!
Best wishes, and blessings always,
Jin
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Haha. I think that is a very funny comment. It is much appreciated. I dont do scarey well without offending people.
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BRAVO! I BOW DOWN TO YOU COUSIN! WOW... BRAVO.. BRAVO!
WONDERFUL! IM JUST... WOW!
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This is probably my one and only vampire poem. It is what happens with low inspiration on a Sunday night. I can always write from a word bank.
I am glad you enjoyed the poem.
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