I want you to feel me when you look into my eyes,
that lead you through the corridors of my soul.
Your soul sleeps in the cold,
allow me to awaken you.
Wake up inside, inhale my love;
I'm tired of playing in dreams
to satisfy my hunger -- I want you!
I can taste you now.
The torture you're about to endure
is harmless, but frightening.
Open your soul up to the possibilities
and you'll find me there ...
... waiting ...
Take my hand --
I'll secure your minds wanderings.
Live a balanced life with me in a world of the unknown.
WHO AM I? You ask;
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Who do you want me to be?
... Your dirty lil' whore?
... A pretty memory?
... Your submissive slave?
OR
loyalty --
--- perseverance -- honesty
-- companionship
--- a mirror of exchanges.
Perhaps even a doorway of opportunities.
Now, is the time where you decide ...
Can you become 'the one' as I have
done so for you?
(c) 08-04-08 @ 18:56
Author notes
You've just taken a peak @ 4 minutes worth of my mind wandering loose. Don't get lost!
She-ra
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Gee Whizz how very sensual!
Gee Whizz how very sensual! This sure hits the spot! Poetically graphic of pure sensuality and fabulous sculpting and bewitching on captivation and lovely terminology and sentiments too I loved the bits that went...
"I want you to feel me when you look into my eyes,
that lead you through the corridors of my soul"
" --- a mirror of exchanges."
Brilliant lines here, outstanding creativity and vivid imagery and so playful and alluring, fantastic work love it very provocative! Very well done!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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Spankya spankya beautiful!
I'm thrilled you read this and enjoyed it. It was indeed a great piece to write. I had a lot of fun sculpting this one. Thanks again for your beautiful comments!
She-ra
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Well alrighty then
First I must say superb! Second 4 minutes Damn! now down to brass tacks "wake up inside, inhale my love" sheesh that is a great line. Then you go and "your dirty little whore" me and you can't stop there you end with sheer brilliance. This is a class A write and proud of it you should be. Life and love in 4 minutes it takes me 4 minutes to get out of bed. COOL, Boog
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It's irresistible, what else can I say...
Thanks for making me laugh -- I've forgotten all about my hard, tight bite on my bum ...
She-ra
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You are such a romantic!! Ha ha ha. Can I answer "E - All of the above"? This is a most fascinating 4 minutes! Have some bunnies
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*evil snicker* Do you have any idea how much it costs to maintain a happy "E -- all the above" type woman? LOL Do ya? Even for 4 minutes... *lmao*
She-ra
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I like this and it is a powerful 4 minutes written! Men want it all and yet nothing lol... I stopped trying to figure all men out and began accepting mine for the person he is, not that it makes it ok, but it sure is easier to live with. And it does appear you have felt love to open yourself completly. Wonderful write.
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Thank you for your kind comment, much appreciated!
Yeah, I send my man crazy -- he says dealing with me makes him feel like he's running circles in a labyrinth of some sorts -- I thought that was the ultimate compliment ever --- haha.
I'll be seeing you around
She-ra
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This is magic! To open yourself totally to someone like this is pure love. There are two types of lovers and the submissive is the most intent and the most powerful but the sub can also be hurt more than the Dominant.
Love,
Amera♥
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... like a switch! I'm so thrilled you enjoyed this piece, sweetheart. You made my night.
Love,
She-ra
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Wonderfully done here. Enjoyed this piece hun...keep upi the great work...
Love
Passions
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Thank you Passions.
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It is hard to share your innermost feelings sometimes but you have done it beautifully, sometimes I wonder what men want too, then when my hubby wraps his arms around me the answer is right there.
. Rewarded 4
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That's the beauty of free verse, in my opinion.
Autumn, it's those moments that makes the relationship strong! Treasure them - always. With those cherished moments that you speak of, are what makes life taste, smell and seem a whole lot sweeter!
Thanks for your kind comment,
She-ra
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a very good poem
from the writer's point of view its ok
actually i like the first two sentences
"11.The employer has the right to tell that how does the employee working."
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*Smiles @ you*
Uh, thank you.
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Sensual, Spiritual & Feminine
Your use of penetrating challenges, honesty and openness, and disclosure of female insecurity (who do you want me to be?) resonates within the human experience of romantic love … a problem and blessing for all of us (smile). Thank you.
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Thank you sultan. You're kindness is appreciated. Happy writing!
She-ra
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Wow,
Nice peak. Bravo on sharing pieces of you!
Mucho love, Timothy
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SPANKYA SPANKYA!!
... y'know that was only 4 minutes worth ...
She-ra
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Or perhaps…. 35 seconds of ecstasy?
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lol -- you get me started A and ... well people are going to discover a whole new cat on the block fast!
you rock!
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Beautiful peek into your mind...I want to pick your brain even more after reading this...love is truly a topsy turvy thing...and hopefully you can get the answers to all of the questions you ask...
I too have been faced with all of this...multiple times...
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Thank you for your comment hun, I appreciate it.
Have a pleasant evening,
She-ra
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