My animal lives in sand
He might sting your hand
Usually about 4 inches long
He might live in Hong Kong
I am kind of red and brown
My insides might be green
Author notes
yes its a scorpion
A contest entry
- Children's Contest: For Children 8 and under by Shutting down.
600 points, ended August 18, 5 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow! Nathan, this is a poem I would be proud to have written, well done! Now I know why your Mom is so proud of you. Excellent!
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Excellent! You're an amazing writer for one so young!
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Hello Nathan
Oh my! I can not figure out what the animal is, there are many it could be, I shall have to wait to the end for you to tell me
You have penned this well hun, very fun to read
Best of luck!
♥
Stay safe
~Manda
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i think it's a scorpion. am i right?
-slick99
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Good luck in the contest!
Great job with this. I just might know what you are writing about.
I love that last line. Thank you for entering the contest, I'm glad I got the chance to read this.
~Kristy
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Is it a scorpion? Ha ha, I liked this because after each stanza I tried to make a guess of what it was! I like it when there's more than the poem reveals. Good luck in your contest!
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Sand Crab?
Now I'm going to think of all the possibilities this could be. Everyone in this contests has stumped me. Good luck to you Nathan!
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o0o0o is it a sand ant? its what it made me think or maybe a scorpian? I love the description that you have used because it really makes the reader think about what you are writing. wll done and b est of luck
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