O love,
I am as a speck of dust
set against the dusk
blindly peering at the sky
through a strange white eye...
O love,
gather my dark face
against your light embrace
and with true love baptize
me in the pools of your eyes-
less I die-
drowning
in their depths
O love...
A contest entry
- true love... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended August 19, 17 entries
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Wow!
This was great, and it flowed well. I loved it all. I don't know what more to say. I totally digged the ending. -
Ah..it seems the bird of your soul is flying and flowing some golden and intimate words from the sky..wonderful indeed....
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An earnest prayer Judy
Nice picture
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Yes, a dependent 'speck' reflecting glorious beauty.
Wonderful!
Sol
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This shows me your love for God and this is just beautifully penned....novy
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This is an indeed spiritual piece in all essence to love and the hope of light!
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beautiful
and the world sings the praises of Lord and the poet.
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