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Broken Mirror

Broken mirror
Frightened girl
Tainted reflection
In a man's world

Broken mirror
Lurking shadow
Soul of shattered glass
Threats no one will know

Broken mirrow
Silent girl
Bitemarks and bruises
In a man's world

Broken mirror
Secret shame
Searches for solace
No mention of his name

Broken mirror
Unspoken pain
Changing reflection
Conversation strain


Broken mirror
Tears of dread
Locked in silence
Better afraid than dead

Broken mirror
Hidden girl
Safety is an illusion
In a man's world

Author notes

This is deep for me because it's taken years to admit. It's about a guy that stalked me a long time ago. The words just came to me this morning.

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  • wow!

    i love it!!! its soo deep! and the part where it says"Broken mirror
    Unspoken pain
    Changing reflection"
    i like this part a lot because its deep and yet i feel as though tons of people can relate to it i know i can .

  • wow..this is an amazing write..I really like the last stanza..
    Broken mirror
    Hidden girl
    Safety is an illusion
    In a man's world
    great write


  • Swangrnv gold member
    August 6

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    WOW..

    I'm sorry about your pain, your fear, your sadness..
    but I gotta tell you, in terms of your writing prowess and composition of this piece? it is outstanding.

    • thank you

      But you don't have to be sorry b/c you're one of the good guys. Everyone gets hurt by someone atleast once. And it was a long time ago..I'm not afraid of that anymore which is why I can write about it now.