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Renegade

Peace, Joy
It's what you bring to me

With your kindness, love
Not love as lovers

But love as fighters
Patience is what you have

When I talk about Andrew
When I say I'll be there some day

Faithfulness is you
Faith that I'll make it

Even when it feels like the end
Self-control you have
Goodness is makes you so...

I just wanted to let you know

Author notes

Goggle Images (White Rose) . I wrote this poem for the contest but I wrote the poem for my good friend Dmonik. I titled it this name not because of the fallen angle part but because hes like no other.

Love Tabby

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  • good job.
    really good.

    i bet your friend is happy for having a poem about him.=]


  • JBudRos
    August 13

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    wow...

    This is amazing...how were you able to group such astonishingly motivating words together...I need this sorry bookmarked and you can have as many hand clapper guys as you want....


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    August 7

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    Nicely written dedication you have penned here.

    Friendship matters

    Best wishes and thank you for your entry in our contest
    Julie


  • humblpye gold member
    August 7
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    Strange Angel

    The one who does not strictly conform, even to the ways of angels or perhaps he is a renegade, an angel outcast doomed to fly an endless sky searching out those who are lost, in need; either way, an angel watches over you, call him strange, outcast, or renegade...his name is your name...

  • humblpye gold member
    August 7
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    Give me a chance,

    I'll come up with a title, this is a beautiful little poem Tabby it's my guess that it was written for someone who cares about you and keeps an eye on ya, just to see if yr ok! everyone needs someone to care for them, I'm so glad you found your someone
    talk later, off to work...yuk
    yr mate
    John


  • Dmonik
    August 7

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    This is a wonderful and heartfelt piece Tabatha.
    It's pure and honest, and not a word is wasted.
    Good luck in the contest with this piece

    'D'

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