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god

god bless me for hating religion
and god bless the sinners who don't seek forgiveness
god bless the racists
god, stop the hatred
god, forgive the minorities
god, know that I'm sorry

god, be brave
honesty has an angelic face
I'll learn from all the mistakes I've made
but I can never really be saved

god, these cigarettes are burning holes in me
god, I've never heard of morality
god, don't judge me by my sexuality
god, learn to welcome individuality

god, baby jesus is all grown up
god, I don't know how to be tough
god, the bible is all bullshit
god, if the truth is there I can't see it

god, all the cops are pigs
god, adam and eve didn't mean it
god, stop the exodus
god, please help us

god, there's a genocide
god, our military's oversupplied
god, this world is so fucked up
and pretending to help isn't enough

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  • SoulToSqueeze
    November 22
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    Speak Your Mind

    I love this poem.
    its pure truth, and people that belive in god, will say that they dont agree with this, but they have no facts to say why it isnt true.
    be yourself, you dont need gods "acceptance"
    alrite im done ranting =]

  • Epilogue
    September 17

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    I hate how people get so defensive over a religion they don't even truly understand. True Christians Will Not Judge you for what you believe or who you are.
    They will love you regardless, without even knowing you. They will try to help you understand the truth- not drag you further from it. And it is because of these selfish hypocrites that all of these people are given false impressions. I often feel like this, even being somewhat of a believer. Since we are not ever going to fully understand we will always just have these sort of doubts- it is customary. And I think God probably understands, you know? He loves us just the way we are, even as flawed as we may be. Just give God a chance and you'll be able to see what I mean. Don't be discouraged by the flaws and fabrications of this filthy world. It will only make you more bitter and self-destructive.
    I know you don't really have to listen to me, but I do hope the best for you. Without judgement, I can say I hope you find your own truth (whatever that may be) and hold fast to it.
    ♥ elizabeth.

  • MmmDamnJarita
    September 13

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    AMAZING

    I truly loved this. I feel like I've tried so many times to sit down and write this before and couldn't... I understand how unbelievably terrifying it can get sometimes, how fucking simple it all seems! Being young is both a blessing and a curse when the universe you want to play free in is at war. I think you would dig some of my stuff Have a wonderful and saucy day.


    • Beata
      September 13
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      thank you so much. If I can't now, I will check out your poetry very soon. You can count on it

  • samm
    August 22
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    cheers for sure

  • righteousme gold member
    August 11

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    I LOVED IT~!!!!

    i like to question things i do not understand... i also love when someone speaks their mind... even against what i believe... though i must admit my god is not a god that everyone believes in... my god is a woman who doesnt make me pay to speak to her... all i have to do is talk... haha.. this piece is powerful in its own right and i am glad to have you as a favorite so i didnt miss it...
    keep it up...


    • Beata
      August 11
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      haha thanks
      comments on this poem tend to either be from people who really hate it or really love it
  • serenata
    August 9

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    I like it and I don't like it.

    As a Christian, of course, I disagree with most of it. I still think it's worth reading, though. It's important to see both sides of an issue even if you already know where you stand.

    As a poem, I like how it flows and the repetition. Some of it is a little trite, but sometimes that's hard to avoid when you're working with common themes.

  • jscribbled
    August 9
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    god, our military's oversupplied

    oversupplied good word.

    god help us

  • e n i g m a
    August 9

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    Some parts are good, but other parts are just repeating by rote the same old Bible-hating stuff that everyone spouts these days "god, the bible is all bullshit". Really, did you have to be so unoriginal?
    "god, all the cops are pigs" is pretty weak too.

    I liked the section where you stopped saying 'god' at the start of every line too, I think you need another one to balance the whole poem, so its not so repetitive. Like a chorus, almost.


    • Beata
      August 9
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      thanks, I'll have to agree that this poem probably needs to be edited.

  • perfectdarkangel
    August 9

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    WOW

    im sorry but i cant say that I like it. Im a christain, there were times ive hated god yes, but he loves me even so. im sorry

    its good and everything, but also its bad because its against god, and I just cant approve of it. so im sorry

    • Beata
      August 9
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      Don't worry about it. I'm used to people hating it by now....luckily a few negative responses won't stop me from speaking my mind

      • perfectdarkangel
        August 10
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        well I dont hate it, and you need to keep speaking your mind. I like this poem but only because is from your heart.

  • Chaos Star
    August 8
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    Oh, yes. Lovely write, I like the standpoint taken.


    • Beata
      August 8
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      thank you, thank you, thank you
      and I was convinced that positive feedback was a thing of the past

      • Chaos Star
        August 10

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        It's difficult to find, especially with a controvercial piece like this. But I think you did a good job on it.

  • SilverWolf
    August 8

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    i really dont like this
    it is so foul! it bashes god!
    some of its true but jeez u put it in a foul way!
    this poem is so not true
    everything is wrong!
    everything is a lie!

    • Beata
      August 8

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      I would say I'm sorry...but I'm not. Honestly, all I'm doing is expressing myself in my poetry. I have a right to write about what I believe, as you have a right to PROMOTE your beliefs/religion as well. We all feel how we choose to feel about things, and it's very unfortunate that you find my words to be foul, wrong, lies, etc...
      I am sorry if I offended you, though. Because that was not my intention.

      • SilverWolf
        August 8
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        well yes we all do have rights
        i dont kno why you beleive that but thats ok
        you probably are wondering why i beleive in god...

        • Beata
          August 8
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          haha of course not!
          I respect everyones choices to believe in what they want to believe. This is just my choice, and I hope for others to respect that in return.

          • SilverWolf
            August 8
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            I respect it. I just don't agree with it. I am sorry I sort of lost it there.
            My apologies! I am really sorry. Somtimes I just kind of lose it. Please don't be offended!
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