welcome to my home
please
let me show you around
its whats called the
open concept
you know-one room four walls
nothing else
the john is over there
in the corner
if you need to go
dont worry about toilet paper
that gets caught in the grate
it will wash down
eventually
the door is there
on that wall
no theres no handle and
it locks automatically
one way in no way out
thats the way we like it
around here
hee-hee
been thinking of
getting a decorator in
to do something with this padding
plain old white gets old
after a while
maybe some paisley or
earth tones like
ochre and brown would
make it seem warmer
in here
see the two slots in the door
one is for green eyes to
watch me
the other for my
food board
green eyes didnt see me
find that shard of plaster
behind the padding
and he hasnt seen me
grinding it down on
the concrete floor
to a sharp fine point
soon green eyes
will become
green eye
hee-hee
you say you have had a nice visit
but now you want to go
sorry
one way in no way out
remember
besides you are the
main course tonight
you should compliment my
bread and gruel
rather well
i think i will start with
your liver
like i did with my mother
oh so many years ago
yes cry please cry hard
your bowels could use
a little salt
your blood is quite tasty
and sets off the flavor
of your flesh very well
whoever replaces green eye
will clean up the mess later
after they shoot me with
the little tranquilizer darts
til then bon appetite
hee-hee
welcome to my home
Author notes
home is where the heart is...and the liver and the intestines and other interesting things
A contest entry
- QUICKIE......PIF PICTURE PROMPT....DARK by jcat.
875 points, ended August 9, 8 entries
Honorable winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Well, tell me about what you think.
Comments
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LOL.......This was a delight!!! While I do believe that I could benefit from a few days in a room like this I am not sure that I would eat anyone nor do I want to be eatten!! Thank you for entering my contest
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GORE and more...a bloody feast
Darkness in a padded cell, beware for he not only bites he eats....this such a perfect take on the picture prompt. Excellent job done here.......
novy


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haha when i clicked on this poem i knew it was going to be good. I was right





