Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

~welcome~

welcome to my home
please
let me show you around

its whats called the
open concept
you know-one room four walls                                               
nothing else
                                                                                                                                 

the john is over there
in the corner
if you need to go

dont worry about toilet paper
that gets caught in the grate
it will wash down
eventually

the door is there
on that wall
no theres no handle and
it locks automatically
one way in no way out
thats the way we like it
around here
hee-hee

been thinking of
getting a decorator in
to do something with this padding
plain old white gets old
after a while

maybe some paisley or
earth tones like
ochre and brown would
make it seem warmer
in here

see the two slots in the door
one is for green eyes to
watch me
the other for my
food board

green eyes didnt see me
find that shard of plaster
behind the padding

and he hasnt seen me
grinding it down on
the concrete floor
to a sharp fine point

soon green eyes
will become
green eye
hee-hee

you say you have had a nice visit
but now you want to go
sorry
one way in no way out
remember

besides you are the
main course tonight
you should compliment my
bread and gruel
rather well

i think i will start with
your liver
like i did with my mother
oh so many years ago

yes cry please cry hard
your bowels could use
a little salt

your blood is quite tasty
and sets off the flavor
of your flesh very well

whoever replaces green eye
will clean up the mess later
after they shoot me with
the little tranquilizer darts

til then bon appetite
hee-hee

welcome to my home

Author notes

home is where the heart is...and the liver and the intestines and other interesting things

A contest entry

Well, tell me about what you think.

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • jcat gold member
    August 9

    Edit | Reply
    LOL.......This was a delight!!! While I do believe that I could benefit from a few days in a room like this I am not sure that I would eat anyone nor do I want to be eatten!! Thank you for entering my contest

  • ennovy silver member
    August 8

    Edit | Reply

    GORE and more...a bloody feast

    Darkness in a padded cell, beware for he not only bites he eats....this such a perfect take on the picture prompt. Excellent job done here.......novy


  • uglyfetus
    August 8
    Edit | Reply
    haha when i clicked on this poem i knew it was going to be good. I was right