few moments in time
we wake up realizing
you have met your soul-mate
looking into eyes of the future
sought for so long
trembling in arms
that finally held you
making love to the one
who stood beside while saying goodbye
to a grandmother
before she left this world
making memories in walmart
laughing as we played like kids
loving how you touch my soul
with just a sweet glance
but now as my father lay
in a hospital room
having open heart surgery
trying to dry my tears
but letting my fears fall
on you
a whisper of an angel's breath
to my ear...it will be okay
my better half and
world until the end
Author notes
"Led Zeppelin"
Prompt:
Keith Urban-You're My Better Half
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UubhvRYWnWc
In a list
A contest entry
- LET THE MUSIC INSPIRE YOU by belle laide.
400 points, ended August 21, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This brought tears to my eyes...
Such a beautiful piece....This shows how much your "soulmate" means to you...
This is gorgeous and I see why you won gold
Lynda
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Excellent Write
i love your emotions felt in this poem..a whisper of an angel's breath to my ear..it will be okay
Love,
Conni'
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This is deserving of a gold award. I just adore this sort of writing. It isn't pretentious and it gives a true, strong message of love and compassion. It's inspiring to me to read such work, always making me realize I can attempt to capture such brilliance in my work, (though no one is saying I will.) Brilliant.
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Moving !
That was incrediable a story teller Bar None! you do evey one a service a AP with your poetry,
well penned, great composition and flow was endless.
Blessings
Rend
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Im in a bit of a country mood
SheDaisy-Come Home Soon
http://www.songmeanings.net/lyric.php?lid=3530822107858517206
or
Tim Mcgraw-Dont Take The Girl
http://www.songmeanings.net/lyric.php?lid=91541
If you prefer a different genre just tell me.
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Keith Urban-You're My Better Half
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UubhvRYWnWc
http://www.azlyrics.com/lyrics/keithurban/youremybetterhalf.html
Keith Urban-Raining On Sunday
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gxDuckV7IAY
http://www.cowboylyrics.com/lyrics/urban-keith/raining-on-sunday-9454.html
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DanielleNicole
Wow sweety i am so honored and humbled! I was surprised yeah!
Again thank you
sss
~Lisa~
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Hun i am in West Viriginia, us redneck girls love country!
Country is stories, sort of like poetry of real life in motion.
Besides i already did others like Night Wish and Evanessence.
This is a breath of fresh air!
Hugs
~lisa~
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