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Hit

Free?

I want to be, while writing

in rare form of Poetry. 

Taking flight, in the finest...quality.

White treasure residue,

while I speak in tongues

of treachery vodoo.

Free

Am I really?

as i sip down life

individually.

Putting together

vacant memories,

from my past

when in reality

I am held

within the crack

of society's nose.

One hit,

is all that I need.

While the comsumption

glides through my viens.

drying out, what makes me bleed.

I am still

Free, to be me.

or

Am I?

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Just a lil something I wanted to write down.

In a list

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  • Sandygram silver member
    August 25

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    Your poems are always so amazing and well written. Great imagery in this. Hope all is well dear niece. Hugs for you. Take care.

    Blessings,
    Sandy

  • Arzab
    August 24

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    Powerful write, Sis. I liked the ending. It makes me think of society and of how it gives us standards and rules in life to go by. In a lot of ways people are free to do what they want, but only up to a certain point. There are still certain rules and laws society has set for people to live by. Anyway, thanks for sharing and keep that pen flowing.


  • onesugar silver member
    August 16

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    I like the question you pose in this...very thought provoking sis...One of your best...the flow just perfect.
    Missed you
    ~sugarcookie~


    • Ephiphany gold member
      August 17
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      Thank you so much sugarcookie

      I've missed you as well. I've been busy...busy...busy but it's all for a good cause.

      The children are back in school, so I got a lil more time on my hands to fiddle faddle around All legal of course

      Anywho...loves you much

  • darell
    August 16

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    Magnificent!

    Baby this was wonderful! I totally understood
    what you were saying. This piece personifies
    your screen name Ephiphany. As it speaks from
    that part of us that can't easily be defined.
    Your words sing in dramatic melodies the
    cords of melancholy and frustration within
    everyone of us. Brilliant baby. Rap on.


    • Ephiphany gold member
      August 16
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      Hey baby

      glad you enjoyed this. I must say that this is one of my "rare formats" but I enjoyed coming from a different angle. Thanks for all the love and support.

      Muahh
      -ephiphany

  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    August 15

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    well said sissy pooh
    the rhythm and flow was smooth...

    miss ya
    Tasha


  • HoneyFire
    August 13

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    WELL THAT LITTLE SOMETHING TURNED INTO SOMETHING BIG!
    GREAT EXPRESSION SIS!
    AND YES, YOU ARE FREE TO BE YOU


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    August 10

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    i loved it vey very different and very deep and it still some how had your twist on it very excellent job i rather enjoyed ths here dear totally i simply loved it


  • ennovy silver member
    August 10
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    Relating Deeply To This Thought

    This an excellent vivid thought I think many writers & poet ask themselves at one time or another...especially when they are in a zone....just do your thing explain later if you are asked. Don't let your creative juices dry up, fester and run...remember Langston Huges: A Dream Defered( you can find him on Old Poetry)...Just do it ! ...............g'momma


    • Ephiphany gold member
      August 10
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      Thank you so much Gmomma

      you know me very well...a zone, I was in and I do this a lot lately. So much is on my mind, and I wake up writing it all down so that I won't forget. Love and have much respect for you always thank you for accepting me from the beginning.

      All the best,
      e

  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    August 10

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    This piece is so, so, so you.
    Yes, Sis you are free to be you.
    Be no other, for you are the best.I really like the lil something you needed to write down. Go write down some more, you are very good at it.
    You find the best backgrounds. Maybe if I'm a good lil girl, you might tell me your secret someday LoL.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Love Ya, Joyce


    • Ephiphany gold member
      August 10
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      Thanks sis

      you always seem to know what to say and make me smile Much love and respect for you my honey bunny

      Thanks again, I always appreciate your support.

      e
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