Diamond’s tears slowly
slither down nights blanket as
young bodies are bruised.
Left for Angels collection
their raspy breath makes dark clouds.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit:
http://villenueve.deviantart.com/art/Sadness-91743315
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A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by whispernthedark.
850 points, ended August 30, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
These are my words:
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This is an excellent take on the prompt, great tanka. Thank you for entering the contest, good luck.
♥
whisper
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You use your words in a great way. I loved the first line as I felt it created a really strong image. I felt the fourth line was powerful and that the thought was kind of haunting. This was a great dark write. x
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Love the powerful imagery in this piece! "Diamond's tears slowly slither down" is definitely my favourite part, rest of it is also excellent!
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unusual write for the prompt . . works well . . liked "Diamond's tears" and "their raspy breath makes dark clouds" . . good luck in the contest
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Oy~
Holy Moly~
This is a Powerful piece like all Your others-
the images also energy radiate from the page
Love the words: Diamond's tears-
also raspy breath- grabs hard
Keep that quill dancing~ Excellent
take on the prompt...Love the form too
Thank You for sharing Your Voice and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in the contest Precious
Best wishes too
and much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Wow! dark and chilling! you have really added fantastic imagery with this one hun! Best of luck in your contest and thanks for sharing.♥
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