How could I have been so foolish, to let you slip between my fingertips
No one compares to you, does it sound brainless that I still listen to every word from your lips
Like you’re still my world and every momentary need, cause I do oh yes I do
The way you talk, the words you chose so perfectly it proves, the love I have for you I can’t undo
Why why why, can’t I stop my emotions from taking over me?
How can I stop my heart, from beating for you why can’t I see?
I’m setting myself up for emotional disaster, can’t I push you away
I want to do it but I don’t, why can I not push my hearts feelings aside and betray?
Nobody’s quiet like you, I’ve looked upon others and held them close to my heart
But it seems they don’t measure up to you, yes it seems pathetic but I won’t lie to myself
No one slightly compares, no one seems to care enough, and no one cares about how I feel. Let’s just say
Nobody’s quiet like you
Author notes
lalala, jesus this is a horrible poem. i really don't like it at all. though i have the confindence it will get the point it needs. this about a good friend of mine.
ricardo, nobody's quiet like you (sorry
A contest entry
- 130 titles by Midnight-x-Rose.
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The best of people let the good ones slip by, whilst we concentrate on those who are not right, it's part of human nature to mess up things, I think. But if we're lucky, we are given that second chance.
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Why why why, can’t I stop my emotions from taking over me?
How can I stop my heart, from beating for you why can’t I see?
nice.
punctuation errors should be fixed though
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i like this but i think the ending line is supposed to be nobody is quite like you
its good though
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*claps* Yay Go Maddie! this is a sweet poem And i dont think its horrible! Its great! I hope you win!!
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...its good maddie...really :/
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