tip-toe through
sacred grounds of yesterday-
where once encased in happiness
-my heart-
housed there for eternity-
in dewdrop kisses
etched in stone of tomorrow
-clandestine memories-
of what is left from yesterday
Please tell me what you think
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Oh My~
Oooooooooooooh this one swells the eyes
Powerful piece yet again- the images crystallize the cheeks
those clandestine memories I say~
Wowzers~~
Love is a Beautiful thing~
but sure can squeeze ya inside
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
with much love & light~ Desire~*~
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Past passes by
Leaving us for now
But heart holds on tight
To the cherished memories to live by
Another excellent write my dear... I love your poems mainly for they have emotions so deep that I can relate to... thanks for sharing your thoughts... take care Minoo
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yesterday
Amzaing that as we grow old we often reach back for those yesterdays. Sometimes it can bring such joy atother times pain. But nevertheless it is still part of us.
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Lovely write here
Indeed I at my age now find myself looking through the memories of many yesterdays and bracing myself for the future to come as my years slowely brings me down yet hold those memories they will be the support to see me through -
Excellent
What a beautiful poem here that you have written.
sacred grounds of yesterday
where once encased in happiness
-my heart-
Oh how I know this feeling all to well just not in a romantic way. Just beautiful.
Many Blessings
Sweet Sis
Love You
Kelle Marie
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This is beautiful and I think both you and I are lucky to have the happy memories of yesterday. Some people never get any.
Love,
Amera♥
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Love it
You make me feel like I am leaned agaist an old oak tree just dreaming my day away
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Excellent
Oh my what a precious poem you have woven. So very special. Thank you for sharing.
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-clandestine memories-
of what is left from yesterday
wow!!! you are always amazing
simple and elegant as always
hugs
c
today is toms surgury
we need to do something special.
any cool ideas....
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Rattling !!
The series of good work includes this one too, my friend. Good art shown, and hope for the same in future as we amature can learn from you experienced ones. -
Wonderful write Sis, I see a different style I think? One I really like!! Well done.
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This is different to what you usually write. In essence, it's the same, but there's something different about it, too. I like it, though. It's really really great. Heartbreakingly sad, but so well written.
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