Millpond’s
mirrored images
reflects blue sky
transcending
earth bound
from heaven above
nature’s power.
Can you feel it?
Take in this moment
lock it away
a keepsake
of your mind.
Author notes
Artlink from host contest.
A contest entry
- Do you like this picture? by Magikal Fairy Girl.
525 points, ended August 24, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is beautiful, you create an aura with this piece, leaving me to rest in the journey you have taken. Well done. Thanks for stopping by with a hoodwink x x x
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Nicely penned
I like the way you ended this one good write
"Can you feel it?
Take in this moment
lock it away
a keepsake
of your mind." the keepsakes of the mind are treasures
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This is a beautiful poem, nature is amazing.
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Nicely done!! Good poem!!!!
Good luck in the contest!!!
!Magikal Fairy Poet!
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Stuning
This picture is like a painted heaven, transending earth bound,
when heaven and earth meet, Beautiful!
very well penned !
Rend
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Short, sweet and very powerful impressions you leave us with this short write! I do love how you end the words,"Take in this moment lock it away a keepsake of your mind." That is what we want to do when we see a scene like this...Beautiful words!
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Yes, I can feel it. Nicely done, I liked most 'a keepsake of your mind'.
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Oh yeah this is awesome. The poem and the picture compliment each other beautifully. Definitely a keepsake of the mind. Well done my good bad girl. Best of luck in the contest!
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Funny how a scene like this Burns its way into your mind. Then again true beauty is not hard to find if you see. You even named it. You even caught the sky.
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