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I Love You!

In my heart you live

In my mind I see you

Every hour of every day

I want you,

 

My desire for you

Swallows me whole,

I cannot live without you

I need you,

 

When you touch me

I shiver in delight,

I kiss your fingertips

My angel,

 

I place you on a pedestal

Worship you with my eyes,

You've stolen my soul with your beauty

My goddess, my world, I love you.

 

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Not sure about this one. I don't write love poems too often. I find it really difficult to write about that kind of emotion.

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  • Dragonheart1 gold member
    September 13
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    i cannot live without you...Great penned words of love


  • Grateful
    September 3

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    Wow! this is a wonderful poem wrapped in the soulful feelings of pure love...i really enjoyed it...

  • Very pretty and beautiful. I really enjoyed this through how you exprssed the emotion of 'love'. Even though you claim it is difficult, you have made a good effort. Beautiful work Mum

    Lotsa love,
    your daughter
    ~Emily~ xx


  • solitarytear
    August 12
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    wow

    that was realy great....you did amazing