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I've Lost A Friend

I've lost a dear friend!
Someone very special!

MY SURROGATE GRANDMOTHER HAS DIED!
SHE PASSED AWAY THIS MORNING!

She at first was a voice teacher
But became a lot more.
She's now someone I've devotion and trust
Like ocean waves on the shore.

She's gone and left me;
God has summoned her home.
My heart is crying terribly;
I feel lost and alone.

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For my surrogate grandmother Adrienne who passed away August 12.

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  • little-hug
    August 19

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    Dear Brian,
    My heart is crying with your heart and will smile when your heart smiles again. Adrienne sounds like she was a very special person but she is at peace now. Grief is such a strong emotion. I just want you to know you are not alone in it.
    love,
    Ellie x

    • Thank you Ellie. Yes Adrienne is a at peace, though I've never doubted that. She was a very peaceful lady. She filled up all that empty space I've felt from not having any close relatives. She was everything to me. Without her I don't know what I'm going to do, but I'm trying. I've been hoping you'd come around because your support is everything to me. Thanks for doing so. Best wishes to you sweetheart. I love you. Brian
  • I love this poem, well done!
    I'm sorry for your loss and the way you are feeling.
    I feel this way for my friend, she was very wise even at the age of twelve. I miss her.


  • Chiefs Fan 1994
    August 14

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    I'm terriably sorry bro. I feel your pain my Great Grandma died seven yrs. ago. Stay strong man love ya man.
    • Michael, the key for me is not to stay strong, but to let the emotion pour out and after it's done, to look back on all the happy times Adrienne and I had together and then maybe be able to smile which so far is working quite well. I love you buddy and I'm always grateful for your support. Thank you for being here at a time when I really needed it. You're a blessing.
      Love Brian
  • Wow sorry about your grandmother, I never knew mine she died from smoking so at least you got to know her...Agaib sorry for your lost :[
  • I'm so sorry Brian!!! I know what it feels like.I've had my great grandma die on the day before valentines day and it had been a good day that day too.
    I love you so much,always know that,
    your AP sister Sundry
    • I love you too sundry. Thank you ever so much. Your love, as well as my other loved ones here is all that will get me through this. Your AP brother Brian

  • almond-li
    August 12

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    i'm so sorry brian!! one of our family friends has brain cancer right now and it's really tough on us. i'll make sure to keep you and your family in my prayers.

    lise
  • awww. I'm so sorry to here that. it seems like she was a great influence on you. it was her time that god chose to take her. if se was in pain she is probably not now. walking with god and his glory.

    in prayer
    musicalangel

    • Believe me, she is walking with God in glory and her influence on me was nothing short of magical. She brought more into my life than anybody in this world. Thank you ever so much.
      Brian

  • Slick
    August 12

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    i am so, so, sorry Brian. We're here for you. it would be terrible to lose someone so close.
    -slick99
  • Mr.
    August 12

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    That's so sad! I'm really sorry to hear it if this has really happened to you.
  • I am sorry daddy Your grandma is in Heaven I hope she will play with Kaydence so she not lonely Kaydence will like that
    • I know Kaydence will love her sweetheart because everybody did. Thank you so much. Your support means a lot to me.
      Daddy
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