The skies turning grey
and sadness fills my heart,
as I drift slowly away
from you as I depart.
I will be lonely again
and filled with great pain,
wondering how from this
any good can be gained.
Living like this
is so hard to bare,
that most of the time
I try hard not to care.
And when the tears
roll down my cheeks,
I slowly become
very shaky and weak.
No words can be said
to comfort my hurt,
it's like I'm being buried alive
covered with dirt.
So I'll close myself off
and build up a wall,
So into constant misery
I won't have to fall.
Author notes
Parting is not sweet sorrow. It is just plain sorrow. There is nothing sweet about it.
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Aw, this is so sad Sweet Roses
I think we all build walls around ourselves when we have been hurt or abandoned...and it makes it hard to trust again. But time and forgiveness eventually erase the pain from our hearts.
Your poem conveys exactly how many of us have felt at least once in our lives
hugs Moony
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It won't always be like that. But you write from the heart and all your poems are good. Your feelings come out wonderfully well. I hope that your life goes well too. Good luck to you and I hope soon you will have some happier poems to post.
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