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To someone special

Watching as the world closes in around you,
longing to help and cure your pain,
listening as the problems unravel,
as the trust between us begins to grow.

I wish to wrap my arms around you;
Tell you it'll be ok,
You mean the world to me and I wish I could help more,
Just little messages, "it'll be ok" "I love you"
Lets keep working on it
We can do it.

No matter what I will not give up,
You mean everything to me,
Don't let me lose you.

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She knows who she is... I talk to her o to often...

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  • penman gold member
    October 1
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    Wonderful

    Such a great creation. So very well done. Thank you for sharing.


  • whispersoftly
    September 4

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    Corinne this is beautiful and heartfelt, messages like that get you through the day especially when things are tough, this is another good write honey well done cheryl xxx
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 17

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    Trust is something that is so hard to share but once you find the right person it becomes wasy to share any problem great write love you
  • an amazing poem

  • Sundown Dragon silver member
    August 13
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    this is sweet my candle sister
    i love you

  • MJ Donnelly gold member
    August 13
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    Oh how sweet and tender, a beautiful heartfelt penning dear.


  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    August 13

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    Your heart is so big, Corrine. I am glad things are working out for you, truly. Love you, hon'.

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