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Cotton Candy Thoughts

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Dedicated to those who dream of dreams!

In her mind she could hear,
The sweet melody of his masculine voice,
She could feel his sensual presence near,
In her heart his love rejoice..

Lying pensive, dreaming thinking,
Upon the cotton candy linen in wedding lingerie,
Her pure white silk G string,
A Nymph in the midst of fantasy..

Thinking of what could be was hard for her,
The soft breeze from an open window caressing her face,
Her ability to concentrate with her heart a flutter,
Her mind and heart ten to the dozen not keeping united pace..

She dreams of a dream of marriage and love,
Sent by God in heaven above and like no other,
The knight in shining armour flying in like a dove,
To make her a loving wife and mother..

Her mind wandering like a fairy in a green forest,
Transcending courtesy of butterfly like wings,
A fairy princess with sparkles of light in her hair so blessed,
Like stars and other such beautiful things!

She dreams of a world beyond the preditorial vultures,
Like Raven's swooping in and Magpies stealing desired possessions,
Undoing the hold of loves holding sutures,
And leaving her falling prey to unwanted obsessions..

Will her knight rescue her in the new dawn light,
And Let not romantic love be a mere illusion of the night or day,
Shining in with the purity of bright white,
And this time coming in to stay!


Copyright: Kazytc
August 2008

Author notes

Allpoetry.com Contest
August 2008

http://allpoetry.com/contest/2417709

I have opted to use photo 1 of the lady lying
in white linen in white bra with dark hair
looking to her side and very pensive as my main
prompt here but bringing in each of the other
picture prompts as well:

(Knight in shining armour on horseback)
(Lady with fairy/butterfly wings in green forest)
(Lady with sparkly lights in her wavy hair)
(Lady like a vulture or raven in nightscape)

and also using 4 of the word bank words these being:

Melody
Nymph
Strings
Concentrate

And finally I brought in a quote line:
"Romantic love is an illusion".

Just hope this is ok wanted to try and use a bit
of everything as liked all of the options but the
main one being the lady in the white (first/top
photo prompt).


Contest Of Options
WORD BANK (use at least 4 words from the word bnk
please.)
Melody
collapsable
Pansophy
Euphony
Seasons
dispear
Nymph
Mini
Strings
Silent Artisan
concentrate
QUOTES
A teardrop is insignificant in a pool of water,
but it can touch the soul as it runs down
someone’s face.
~Unknown
There are two times in every man's life when he
is thoroughly happy; just after he has met his
first love and just after he has parted from his
last one.
~H. L. Mencken
Romantic love is an illusion. Most of us
discover this truth at the end of a love
affair or else when the sweet emotions
of love lead us into marriage
and then turn down their flames.
~Thomas Moore
RULES! because life is not fair we must always
have rules...
1. No Bashing other poets.. If I see this
happening I will dq no questions asked.
2. Nothing erotic.. I don't mind if you do
sensual, but I don't want erotic..
3. ThErE wIlL be NonE oF ThiS WRItInG.. i WiLl DQ
yOU iF I SEe It!
4. Nothing over 35 lines please.. I have a really
reall bad attetion span..
5. please credit:Bring_Back_Romance_by_kedralynn
for the top picture and photobucket for the
rest.. Thanks..
6. I have the right to close this contest if I
feel there are not enough entries, or if I just
feel like closing it.. But I will send out a note
24 hours before I will close the contest..
And thats it!!! see, not so bad.. lol. Have fun
people and be creative..
YOU CAN RESERVE, JUST PLEASE COME BACK AND FINISH
YOUR RES BEFORE THE CLOSING DATE..
Angel
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  • Kazytc gold member
    August 29
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    Thanks millions Sis!

    Thanks millions Sis, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
    Glad you liked it.
    Your contests are always fabulous fun with lovely picture prompts and so enjoyable to do, thanks for the honour and privaledge of taking part in them its fantastic. You really are an angel thus living up to your namesake!
    Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
    Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc XX

  • Angelflower gold member
    August 28

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    You did such a wonderful job.. I am truly amazed by how this turned out.. the flow was wonderful and the imagery was very vivid! And what a story you told as well.. bravo!! thank you very much for sharing! I truly loved it!! best of luck in the contest!

    Angel