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[ I am so scared ]

I am so scared
There's darkness all around me
I hear sounds
I wonder if he's gonna get me

I want someone
To come out here
Someone to discover
Me lying here

My hands are scraped and bloodied
I tore at the fence
My face bruised and swollen
To many blows to count

Why do I deserve this
Is it my fault
Can't you help me now
I guess you don't care
Nobody cares to care

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  • this contest is being hosted by a minor.. she can't view adult entries. she asked me to help. I am removing your entry for that reason

    kat
  • A lot of feeling here. I've known the feeling all to well. Love the poem though, very well done. Keep up the good work.
  • A lot of feeling here. I've known the feeling all to well. Love the poem though, very well done. Keep up the good work.
  • A lot of feeling here. I've known the feeling all to well. Love the poem though, very well done. Keep up the good work.