As the sun goes down and the moon shines bright,
You look up above at the star-filled night.
They look so peaceful just twinkling in the dark,
Never moving an inch or releasing their mark.
Remember this beauty for they never truly last,
As one shoots across the sky just remember the past.
Try not to focus on the nothingness it leaves behind,
Just keep the beauty of a shooting star in the back of your mind.
Author notes
this is for wings of fire 27, for a poem of hers reminded me, life will always go on, but should you mourn for what was lost, or celebrate what once shone bright.
Is it better to mourn the loss of a star or celebrate the beauty of its last few minutes?
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it's better to celebrate the beauty....
great poem
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this is a beautiful piece! I really like it.
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Have Peace!
I enjoyed this Poem! I just happen to be a little bit psychic or I am just an optimist but many good things are coming for you! -
aww damn thats lovely! so beautiful and uplifting... great flow and imagery, and idea too. i loved this for how positive and gorgeous it is! lovely write indeedy
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Very beautiful and with such an inspiring meaning!
keep it up...Great work!!! anddddd keep on writing! This piece was amazing!!
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it's beautiful..... i love it, very very well done...
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I find this a very positive, upbeat piece about seeing the beauty not the beast. I found the rhyme very good, very pro and the flow was just fantastic.
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That's wonderful.Loved it really and it was so much better than the sad poems
Seemed romantic and lovely..love poems of this style
About the question..I think celebrate the beauty of its last few minutes is so much better
live the moment and forget about tomorrow
Anan.
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