waves crashing
against minutes
vanishing imprints
of today
keeping safe
my memories
for you
in oceans
connected by
invisible love
Author notes
Form poetry by Salt Therapy
Prompt: Title taken from poem by Salt Therapy called: Aglet Rivers
In a list
A contest entry
- Title Prompt, 20 word style by Lithium Moon.
600 points, ended August 19, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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You had me at the first two lines.
But then the rest of it, made it that much more complete.
Really enjoyed this dear poet.
Wonderful job.
Only wish I had more time to devote to this site. Lately I've been more like a, drive by, poet than anything else.
Blessings to you.
Antonio
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Thanks for stopping by, glad you enjoyed the read.
Juls
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this is beautiful. I personally think the title sailing memories would have fit better. you don't have to change it, it doesn't take away my love for this poem. great job. thanks for entering, good luck! ~ Kerri
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I have felt this before.
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Oh wonderful! I love how you put this foprm together so well.
Excellent!
All the best with this
gaylene
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Well done You
C
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