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Slanted Demise

You open the door to your bedroom
I become so afraid..
You might attack me again
Like you did the other night
You’re 17, I’m 18
Yet you over power me
I can’t stop you
For I’ll go to jail.


"No! Stop!" I scream
Not tonight please
I don’t want to be abused
I don’t want to explain to them
What happened AGAIN!


Stop please!
I’m on my knees begging.
I’m bruised from head to toe


I can’t think straight
The abuse you’ve given me
Effected me to the brink
Verbally,
 Mentally,
  Physically,
   Emotionally.


What can I do?
I’m singled out,
I can’t keep fighting to survive
Nothing can save me,
You’ve finally killed me.

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Thanks Eggy (Holly) for helping me come up with a title

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  • wow hunnie this was so powerful and so sad, no one deserves that pain, i know first had how it is to be abused, thanks to an ex i had. but we will overcome it and things will get better, anyhow i loved this poem and i simply adore you.

  • oh dear hunny this is so sad
  • Woww

    This was amazing...so dark and sad yet incredibly powerful. Unlike anything I've ever read before.
    I hope the abuse stops/has stopped and everything gets better for you. No one deserves to get pushed around this way.
    You are a wonderful writer. Keep your chin up


    • Dancing Feather gold member
      August 22
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      Thank you for the comment. It hasn't stopped, I wish it would though. I'm getting sick of it. I'm glad you liked the poem.
  • LOVe the background
  • No one ever gets used to to abuse like the way no one ever is really used to pain and suffering. You aren't used to anything it just become a part of your daily life and there is nothing you can really do to stop it. Hun I understand somewhat what youa re going thru from a taste i know too well. Can't say that i really know because its never been to this kind of extent. But trust me i'll always be here and hey who knows college will fly by you'll have a job and can get your place to stay if not before i turn 18 and get my own you can live with me i'll come get you and everything. It won't be a burden but a burden i'd gladly take in to my heart.



    ~Silky

    *Love You Sweety Always and Forever*


  • PhantomsAngel87 Greeters member
    August 21

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    Ouch.
    The flowing abuse hits me sharply as I read as though I was the one being hurt; your words are powerful hun.

    One of your best!

    Stay safe
    Love to ya
    ~Manda


    • Dancing Feather gold member
      August 21
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      Thanks for the comment.

      Stay Safe *thinks* Yeah...I'll try no guarantees.

      My collar bone's been bruised since monday night tuesday early morning when my brother pushed me in the collar bone as hard as he could because he got pissed

  • Dmonik
    August 21

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    Nicely done Kayla.
    Dark and powerful, filled with emotion.
    This is an excellent write that hits the reader.

    Bravo

    'D'


    • Dancing Feather gold member
      August 21
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      Thanks, D. I appreciae it. I hate it though. I hate telling people what happened to...but yeah.I've dealt with abuse for my entire life, i should be used to it right?
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