It's hard waking up every day trying to find your true self,
It's hard I can't see past the pain in my heart and this broken place called home doesn't help any,
I feel as if I'm fading away I have no more purpose on this earth.
I have no more calling so as I lay here and fade away,
And
feel the blood going down my wrist all,
I have to really say is I hope you can forgive me I know it's hard to forgive this man I've but this all into your hands and as I lay here fading away I just want you to forgive me.
I'm not a bad man but I can't go living in this hell anymore.
Author notes
Fading Away - Demon Hunter song # 8
user name(WickedOne)
A contest entry
- Song prompt by Godsemogurl.
475 points, ended August 26, 6 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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short and yet extreme
strong , full of feeling an overwhelming emotion
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Omg!!! Wow babe this is awesome. I really like this alot. Awesome. Love you
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Line 1: Its to It's
Line 2: Its to It's; i to I; cant to can't; hart to heart; don't to doesn't
Line 3: im to I'm; i to I
"I have no more calling" - doesn't make sense, what are you trying to say?
LIne 4: i to I; hear to here
Line 7: i to I; ditto; its to it's; i to I; hear to here
Line 8: Im to I'm; i to I
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