I stand accused...
As I lie
swallowed whole;
in the thoughts
of
a river
cried from
the
very eyes,
that looked
into yours
and
made a
Promise
that was meant,
to be kept
by a soul
that wasn't
broken.
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This is truly a gorgeous piece full of deep emotion. I love it!
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Thank you very much.
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Such a painful piece. Full of sadness. The hurt just seeps through the words. Nice job
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Thank you
glad you enjoyed this piece.
e
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Oh my. Such a sad and depressing write. I can feel the hurt and sorrow that you must have felt while writing this....here u go sweetie...
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I'm good, actually that was something that happened to me a long time before now, but I've overcome this part of my Life, I just write about it, in hopes to help another one along the way. 
Thanks for the comment
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ooooooh
i love this one sissy, love it!
i love your naughty work but when you go deep like this it just speaks to me, you know i hear this one loud and clear. brilliant, love ya!
Tasha
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Hey sissy poo
thankies for the clappies I'm good, been working some long hours 
but it's all worth it towards the end take care, and thanks for keeping in touch
ephiphany
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Lovely Words!!!!!!!
Good morning, A very beautiful but sad poem you have written. Nice imagery full of emotion. Always a pleasure to read your poetry. You take care. Hugs and Smiles.
Bless You,
Sandy
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Thanks auntie Sandy I appreciate your comment on this.
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emotional and deep Sis,
you packed so much feelings into
just a few words, and as always
you show pure class... You have
an magnificent style of your own.
i always love what you pen.
loveandblessings2u & yours always
Joyce
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Hey sis Joyce
it's always good to hear from you...I gots to do better, huh? been working some long hours and just now getting the chance to come out and play for a spell. Thanks for keeping in touch 
love you
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(playing 'catch up'). Write on, sis.
Dez
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I see...
I don't mind at all, I've missed your comments, Dez. So it's always good to see you my Brother
_ephiphany_
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Potent Piece
Penned so wonderfully, always inscribed with deep imagery!
I like this, read well, and you
no matter what ya pen!
Thanks for sharing the wonders of you, peace~
-Timothy
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Thanks again Tim
you are indeed a great friend to me
much love
_e
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Deep
These are some very deep amd emotional words here, this poem is very short but very to the point, excellent poem, thank you for sharing and keep them coming.
raingoddess
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Wiw
hey sis I'm so happy to see you thank you so much for this wonderful comment. As always,
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SISTA!!!!! How are you!!!! Had some time so you know this was my first stop! I see you're still killin em sis! Love this and how it takes you from pain to a sweet memory! Hope to start dropping by more often. You know where to find me though. TTYL!
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Hey punkin
thank you so much for this comment. Ive missed you so, but I know things are changing, but please keep in touch ok thanks again.
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Oh baby! don't cry....
you make me sad when you're like this.
Sweet melancholy heart dry your tears
the world isn't perfect nor are we.
of love forever,darell
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It's hard not too,
but as time goes by it does get better
Thank you so much for being there when I needed you the most, I hope that you will never change
Love Always,
lil ole me
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such deep emotion here. accusations hurt especially when they are of the soul and promises broken are heart wrenching. thank you for sharing your amazing talent. keep writing darling! God bless you always keeping you in my prayers
~mom~
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Hey Ma
I've missed you, but all in the same so glad to see you stopping by Thanks for the comment, I really cherish your wisdom and I Love you
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True Love Understands
Very deep words of emotional pondering; searching for the path of forgiveness....Excellent write my dear....Love ya!...G'momma
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Thanks G'Momma
always love your comments
Thank you
e
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This felt quite sad sis...feels like a promise made to a loved one that wasn't kept.
Loved the flow.
~sugarcookie~
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Thanks cookie
for your support
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