long leaf branches flail
howling twisted shadows stark
against the door frame
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what makes this unique for me among your haikus is its setting. it gave me a feeling that the beauty of nature is not just a picture, but is something real, something i can touch, something within my reach.
you really have a gift in finding beauty in the ordinary, and making the most unnoticeable scenes eventful.
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Yea nature isn't just a picture. That I suppose is both part of its beauty and its terror.
I try to focus on aspects of nature that others rarely give thought to, or even on aspects commonly focused on, but from an angle left unconsidered.
I'm glad you enjoyed this, Carmen.
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