I reach out to touch your skin
You fade into the sun
Disappearing air feeling thin
Trying to catch your memories I run
I walk past what used to be or spot
Before you crashed your car
In frozen time I was caught
I can see how we gazed at the stars
I wish I could have you back
I’d kill to hold you tight
My mind will never stay on track
You was my only light
You kept me going through the day
I loved you more and more
I think of you every single day
You left when I thought life was sure
I had the perfect guy for me
A job that paid good money
The future I thought I could see
Until I lost you honey
I see you all over town
I imagine you here with me
You smile at me not making a sound
For you back I plead
I reach out to touch your skin
You fade into the sun
Disappearing air feeling thin
Trying to catch your memories I run
Author notes
in memory of aaron micheal neel, and i love you like a sis chelsey,bet it was hard, just know i am always here for you.
Comments
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Beautiful write here. Absolutely heartfelt. I loved the last line. It was absolutely wonderful!! You did a great job with this one!
Warmest,
Mylee -
Great Write
You are very talented. Your wrting is strong this piece tells of the emotion you feel after a loss.
Very good strong emotions.
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awww this was a great write!!
I especially like how u used to first stanza as the last..I love this
I had the perfect guy for me
A job that paid good money
The future I thought I could see
Until I lost you honey
I see you all over town
I imagine you here with me
You smile at me not making a sound
For you back I plead
Loved these two stanzas also!!
Great write
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