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imaginary holy roller coaster

red chases red,
revenge on a dream
a dog with a collar and 'missing' posters
red chases red,
and red chases green
and together they make the perfect
imaginary holy roller coaster

shooting dimes from the top of the high rise
waiting for clients that never show
alone on their bicycles, hiding from oil
and overpriced cellular phones

red chases red,
revenge on a dream dog with stolen chewtoys
and a golden collar
red chases smoke,
and red chases fog
and together they make the perfect
imaginary blueberry all american roller... coaster

its a dump in the back of the dumpsters
where stoners go to dye their spleens
the color of high and the color of oil
and hide in their color tvs

its a trip in the back of the high rise
where bike cops go to mess with things
we smoke our hopes down in the basement
the elevator has wings

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  • kira1115
    September 1
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    I really enjoyed this poem. I really love the vivid imaginary used in this poem. Very well worded.


  • Beata
    August 22
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    Great!

    I really enjoyed this