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the visitor

you run your fingers down my spine, i shiver
and cry out, your voice
is cold hopeful comfort in this
dark neon place
your touch is nothing short of wonder
in this bed of hate

i pull you close too quickly,
sigh but you
are all too willing to comply
a visitor to my
skewed reality
my sparkling deep ceiling tied to
nothingness in a fog of spin
skin on skin,
we move together
in this bed of
memory

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  • Swan song gold member
    August 23
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    in this bed of memory makes this a poem about a very very steamy kisss