i love you and my soul is dust...
i love you and i am fading for you
you are my nothingness
i love you and i have fallen for you
i love you and my mind is waves on an interrupted tide,
a distressed ocean that cant make up its mind
maybe the moon came too soon
but how am i supposed to see the moon rise
with the sunset in my eyes?
i love you...
can i be your manner
can i be your arousal
can i be your soft spot in the one moonbeam that shines
through the window in the darkness
can i be your words, your truth
can i be your space
make me your
nothingness
im already fading
i love you and my soul is dust
A contest entry
- A love That Surpasses All. by Poetryintheblood.
525 points, ended September 15, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Thank you for your beautiful entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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Amazing.
I love it. I love the last stanza "make me your nothingness i'm already fading i love you and my soul is dust" you win cookies and hugs and lollipops.
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this flows very nicely, so much in fact it seems more song than poem-y to me. i can hear the tune flowing in my mind.
favorite part:
but how am i supposed to see the moon rise
with the sunset in my eyes?
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