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No Back Up, Just Trust

Lost in his words, his promises
Not thinking about a back up plan
I believe him
Something about how he says it
The way he gets them words out of his mouth

His voice so deep and raspy
Making me shiver
Making me melt

His eyes so dark and penetrating
Yet at the same time
Great and loving
Making me think of his soft side

And how he holds me tight
And whispers in my ear
Making me smile
Wanting it all to be true

All the promises he tells me
The same things every guy tells
But ends up braking

Something about him
Makes me think he is for real
He will never brake these words he tells
The life he says we will live
The way he will treat me
How he will love me forever

I believe it all

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i love you steven!

yep, i know, not good

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  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 23

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    awwwww this is so sweet, it is good i hope things go good for you and your love,
    take care

    Stephanie ♥
  • staceyrella
    August 22

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    Very Sweet

    This is a very romantic poem. I like the way you ended with the honest trust you have. Very good write.