hush a minute
let me whisper in your hear
got a message from heaven
He said to make very clear
so listen close child
I need to talk to you awhile
it won't take a long time
but before I'm finished
that frown on your face will be a smile
you see, the Father noticed
that your heart was broke in two
He said, "I saw you crying there
and thought "what can I do?
I can't stand to see my little one
with no hope left inside
I'll be there with you tonight
and dry every tear you cry
I'll sit right there beside you
hold your head to my chest
I'll put my arms around you
because loving you
is what I do best
so look for Me in the darkest
corner of the night
you'll feel my love come to you
though you don't see Me with your eyes
I'll wipe your tears and hold you
tighter than tight
and I'll even give you a reason again, to smile"
now take it from this angel
for I know this is true
I watched Him hang upon that cross
I can tesify,, He did His best loving you
Signed: your guardian
Date: all of your life
Author notes
I chose option #4 Finding hope
A contest entry
- Give me hope!!!!! by Cena-of-Destiny.
300 points, ended August 24, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow! This really touched me. The timing of reading this could not be more perfect. You express finding hope very well. Congratulations on the gold!
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I'm so glad this write of mine touched you. You are way to thoughtful!!! Thanks so much.
SilverButterfly
Mary
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WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This touched me MAry on a personal level for it reminds me of my poem "Loneliness" when I wrote of going up to heaven and talking with my heavenly father...your words from this angel are so personal to me because I have been going through some "stuff" as you know and it renews my hope and lets me know that my God is still there and That loving us is truly what Jesus does best and the best example of his love was shown at calavary!!! Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece with me today!!!~~Toni~~
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thanks Toni, I'll have to read "Loneliness". I love your writings too!!! Two minds thinking alike I guess.
Hugs
Mary
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Special Anointing!
Words from heaven so choicely written for this contest! What can I say...Words are not enough to convey my feelings with this write!
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You're so encouraging Rose, thank you so much for the lift!!
GBY and hugs
Sis
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Chills. The whole poem gave me chills of happiness, i was smiling the whole time, with a tear in my eye. it really made me smile and made me happy. Great job!
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then my job writing it was accomplished! thank you. I'm so happy I put that smile on your face
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