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This Pen Of Yours

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this pen of yours

anointed with love

tells Matthew's story

and the mother he loved

 

this pen of yours

so used and worn

speaks of a heart

broken and torn

 

this pen of yours

will  heal many hearts

because of your loss

you wrote from the start

 

so don't think for a moment

you haven't touched us

for when you write from your heart

we cherish this pen of yours

 

 

 

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  • blaizenaway
    September 15
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    One can really feel your personal connection with this poem. Beautifully written great read **seems I don't have enough point to give you full applause so I owe you a couple lol**

    • SilverButterfly gold member
      September 15
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      thank you so much for such a nice comment! I appreciate you taking the time to read it.

      SilverButterfly

  • HeavensDaughter
    August 26
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    I love the sentiment you express here. What a beautiful message to write and send.


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      August 26
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      oh thank you so much for the sweet comment! You are so kind my friend.

      SilverButterfly

  • Talking Toni gold member
    August 24

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    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    MAry, you are so talented and have such a unique and touching way of reaching out to those who are hurting!!! This was so generous of you to write for Kelle!!! iT IS DEFINITELY worthy of the gold!!!ANd it certainly encourages Kelle to keep penning her thoughts and feelings as she goes through this terrible process of grieving Matthew...Thanks for writing such a tender piece for my good friend!!!Love to you dear!!!~~Toni~~


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      August 24
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      oh Toni, you are my dear friend too! I know how much you care for Kelle, after all you are the one who told me about her and Matthew. you have been a huge support and friend to her and God will bless you a hundred fold for it.

      thank you sweet Toni!!
      Love
      Mary

  • Melodies silver member
    August 23
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    AWWW... What a beauty! Tenderly penned right from the heart, it is. BRAVO for good poets like you.


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      August 23

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      Melodies you are such a sweetheart to comment!! to get wonderful words from you like this is very humbling because it comes from one of the best poets here!!

      thank you!
      hugs
      Mary

      • Melodies silver member
        August 23

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        O, Sweet Mary, would that it could be true...
        for I am just a girlish maid, but loving friend to YOU!

        lol Melodies

  • stavykm gold member
    August 23

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    Oh Wow Thank You

    What a beautiful poem. The title is beautiful to me, This Pen Of Yours. Well I guess you could say I have been writing from the start of the loss of my Matt. My one prayer would be that someone who is hurting like me and one of my poems they will find some comfort in knowing they are not alone in those feelings. I feel so blessed by this beautiful poem, thank you for your encouragement and saying that I have touched some hearts and that you have cherished my pen. This means a lot to me for I'm not quite sure I'm to good of a poet but I am trying to process through in my attempts to write poetry. Thanks to you dear friend and others that have come along side of me this year I don't know that I would have made it this far. It still is so hard and painful. Thank you for blessing me today and entering my one year on AP contest and the best to you in the contest.
    Wishing You Many Blessings
    Much Love
    Kelle Marie


  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 23

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    Magnificent Write!

    Wow, dear sis..You have expressed everything that I would like to say, only you have said it better than I...Every word choicely written, so much just made for her in every respect...Magnificent!


    • SilverButterfly gold member
      August 23
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      wow thank you Rose! That is a true compliment coming from a great poet as you. But I know for a fact you are a great writer that I honestly admire!!

      hugs
      Sis
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