the wedding dress was
a little white lie
trailing
behind her [DAZZLING] smile,
she never met my eyes
[hers were always veiled],
she wasnt me.
you left me in the road.
the reception was
a tuesday morning
food court linoleum
nightmare.
i was invisible
beside her.
she hungers my dreams,
flaunts your
everyday,
everywhere
all over
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EDIT 9/13: so when i wrote this it was about a dream i had where my boyfriend got married to this chick as you can tell. i have had prophetic dreams before and today i met the girl in the dream.
Please tell me what you think
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seperate our lanuage prophetic dreams berore and today
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Great stuff! I look forward to reading more of your work!
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I adore your style. ^.^
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thankiess
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WOW!
this is really stellar! you're greatt at writing, you would be doingg teh world a favour by continuing to writee
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sounds like you might have questions inside about the length of your relationship, like it might not last forever. surely you deeply love him, but if it is not meant to be, there will be a stronger love waiting around the corner somewhere for you. you just have to find that corner.
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wows
wows you are really good.....and it's like one of mii dreams that i've had so i love it....
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i like this
i was just at a wedding...
i like the little white lie line and the linoleum detail a lot. i think they make the poem for some reason.
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