I waded through
pungent thoughts,
then remorse reminded me
of your sweet smell
Author notes
Prompt:
"I flushed your roses down the crapper,
then jumped in right after." – Cerulean
13 words
WTF!!! LMAO *hits delete*
In a list
A contest entry
- huh uh..... Quickie 5-13-15 by markgrif.
350 points, ended August 24, 4 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Nice, the way you twisted this.
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To think that this was penned from that crazy quote of Mark's lol. VERY well thought piece to go along with the prompt, and in so few words. Nicely done!
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This is amazing. I wonder how you got such deep emotion out of such few lines. This is beautiful.
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Such an excellent take on this prompt!! i wouldnt of known what to do with it. hehe. grats on the silver sis!!! Another for your growing trophy case.
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A delightfully sensuous answer to the somewhat disturbing prompt. Your development from it is artistic and thoughtful and real. I liked this. A lot. For me "short" rules ---- wish I could do it LOL
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An interesting write hun, A very creative quote to go with this lol. Before I was read the quote in the AN, I was thinking about how places and smells etc, can make you be reminded of your past, then the quote put a whole new spin on things lol! Congrats on the Silver!! 
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wonderful write to the prompt...congrats on your silver... not sure of the prompt though..
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No no no, thisis all wrong, this must surely have been meant to be gold, I loved the quote and your spin on this was exceptional. Well done on the shiny silver. Best to you
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Wow
A beautiful write here with excelent imageyr..Congrats on teh silver!
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Simple. Beautiful. And oh so silver worthy. I wonder what the winner was like... O.O!
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Aww... this is so emotional! Short yet with a powerful emotional image. The word "pungent" is really strong.
Love,
Amera♥
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great write, certainly used the 13 words to good effect, great write hun.
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That's an amazing write. 13 words? wow, you sure used them well.
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Thanks!
It's weird ! lol
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Hillarious quote...lol Nice poem...it's very sweet - especially the last line and represents the quote well. Good job and congrats on the silver!
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Wow
This was short and right to the point. You did an excellent job I think with the prompt here. You just amaze me with your poetry. You are so very gifted sweet one.
then remorse reminded me
of your sweet smell
Just brilliant really if you think about it!!
Much Love Always
Your Sis
Kelle Marie
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why you wanna delete it??!
i wouldnt have written n e thing close to urs from that prompt
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Seems
The fragrance of a certian lover shall always be in the air.
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Congrats on the silver!!
LMAO...this is class! Pure genius with both the write and the prompt! So please I saw it made me laugh! Sure you want to bin this...its so awesome!!
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LOLOLOL Well glad you didn't delete as it now has a silver thingy on it
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Eeep... I'm still gonna delete it!
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That was very strong writing. So much said in such a small space. The whole story was visual.
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Arrgh... shouldn't have wasted your clappies bro!! I'm deleting it!
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NOOOOO!!!!! LMAO
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But is good...
*huggles*
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A very difficult prompt, good job, I paniced. Good luck, Boog
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Here you go!
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LMAO
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Short and to the point. The reader is quickly brought into the read and emotion flash before eyes without thought, just passions.
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Awesome!
Is that only 13 words? What the hell? LoL I haven't seen one of these arbitrary-amount-of-words contests in so long!!!
I'm so glad I didn't enter.
'waded'<--like drowning...getting lost in those "pungent thoughts" (ew...pungent...like shit-smelling...like CRAPPER).
Very relevant.
"then remorse reminded me/of your sweet smell"
EW!!! LMAO 'remorse' is a kick-ass word.
Roses & poo...=sweet smell
Interesting math.
This is awesome, & it looks more like 20 words than 13!!!
Good luck...like ya need it. Tell me when you get the Gold trophy.
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Silver
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Same diff!
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Beautiful
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Well, brevity is the soul of wit?
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Cant delete it it not that bad goodluck in the contest best wishes and much love always 
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Awesome work here sis!
Good luck and thanks a lot
for your thoughts on mine!
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You're missing some hopping bunnies?
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You are absolutely right! lol
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LMAO I always bug people about that
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Enter mine as well
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