Time keeps moving forward,
and you might be moving on,
but for me
I'm stuck wanting you.
All them times
you said you loved me
planned to marry me.
All them times we laughed
and ran the phone bill up.
All them times
taken from us and shoved in the past.
The emotions are going to leave,
going to fade into the past.
That is when i will fade away with them,
trapped in love with you.
The tears have dried up.
I still love you though,
even though
you are no longer mine.
Author notes
ily and i pray 2 god we will get through this new rule your mom has made. it hurts so bad, her taking you away from me. pushing our love to the side. you promised to love me and wait for her to let us be again, and i will wait to baby!
yea i know it sucks, a lot on my mind though
Comments
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I realy like the title of this poem. The words you've chosen tells a sad story but how things in life can be, yet time keeps moving forward.


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This poem is beautiful and so sad. It's such a painful feeling to be apart or to fear being pulled apart from the one you love. You described that so well. Amazing piece!


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I know the feeling of separation from a loved one, my own bf had his parents separate us for awhile it was a dreaded experience but we pulled through. This poem was raw and filled with real emotions, only the tooken should be taken instead but other than that it all looks good to me, keep writing.

