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Endless Beauty



Beauty lies within

like a young red rose in bloom

the universe sings

eagles fill the morning sky

as my heart lovingly sighs

 

 

the blazing sun falls

 

as the stars come out to play

 

granting miracles

 

touching the hearts of many

 

bringing peace to our planet

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • Lily otv
    September 7

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    Nature has a way of making us find beauty within all she provides around us and within ourselves. A very sweet and touching poem


  • Ms. Black Eyeliner
    September 4
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    "Beauty lies within" very true

    this is very good great job


  • ComethTheBloodyRain
    August 28

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    Very Good!

    This is a very awesome poem. Hopefully the peace of which you speak is not far away, but the beauty of our planet is amazing and you captured it well. Good write and keep up the amazing work!

  • saddie23 gold member
    August 27

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    nice

    Very short, but the contest calls for a double tanka if you could add another part that would be most welcome. Thank you for entering my contest. Good luck. Saddie23


  • Elisabeth Strange
    August 27
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    very nice!


  • trekkergirl gold member
    August 25
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    short but very nice.

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