I keep having this dream
of you walking away
and I fall on me knees
begging you
to please stay.
But you just keep
walking and not looking
back.
Then I grab my chest.
Having a
panick attack.
I stop breathing
and start to cry
even more.
But you just keep walking.
You hear my wheezing for sure.
I'm down and a crying
on this old dirt
and you just walk away
in ripped pants with out a shirt.
Your hair
just blowing,
sun shining bright.
I try to wake up.
I put up a fight.
Weaker
and weaker
I now become.
And you walk away
swagging,
shining in the sun.
Then I wake up.
I open my eyes.
Your laying right next to me
comforting my cries.
lol, idk, a crazy dream
Comments
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Wow...
I can kinda relate to this... I have had the same dream over, and over about losing my friends... By the way, I think you did a great job with your poem. I hope to see more from you.
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awww Great write..I've had a dream like that..but in the end I'm dead and he's left for sure and doesnt care..
Really like thiss lexiee
But you just keep
walking and not looking
back.
Then I grab my chest.
Having a
panick attack.
I stop breathing
and start to cry
even more.
But you just keep walking.
You hear my wheezing for sure.
This part was my fav
Loved it hun!!
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So often this dream ...
is no dream but true.
What solace is there other than we all know this feeling?
And: still it is no solace at all.
Be well!
Myra
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